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Very cool! I wasn't aware that the string libraries in FL Studio could produce that kind of sound (haven't really used the program, to be honest). You've definitely absorbed a lot of musical know-how from your years as a musician, even if it's not all, as you said, things you can put into words like music theory. As far as constructive criticism goes, there were a few places where a dissonant note or two jumped out at me, but nothing too noticeable. The overall mixing is pretty good as well -- the parts all come out when they need to and fade back into the texture appropriately. It's obvious that you've put a lot of work into this. You should definitely keep writing music!

I like some of the sounds you've got going here. It does stagnate a bit throughout though, which I think could be helped by varying up the beat you've got going. Right now you only have the kick drum, as far as I can tell -- adding in a snare/clap and/or some hi-hats would help liven things up a little and keep a sense of forward momentum. Just my opinion, obviously -- you may not want that much motion, I dunno. Hope this helps!

SilentSpace responds:

Thanks for the review, it helped quite a bit. I updated, and the addition of a hat makes the song sound far better, in my opinion. Also, I fixed a couple of unmatching patterns and made a few things sound all around better, so feel free to check it out again whenever. C:

I like the guitars in this one. Not something I'm used to hearing in dance music. I'll be sure to check out your album!

wearefm responds:

Thanks man!

Jeremy lives in the Seattle area, where he is pursuing a M.S. in Computer Science. He has experience writing scores for video games, as well as arrangements and original compositions for vocal groups and choirs. He is currently accepting commissions.

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